Run-on Sentences (February 18, 2025) PDF
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This document focuses on correcting run-on sentences. It provides examples and methods for identifying and fixing these grammatical errors. Users learn to analyze sentence structure and improve their writing skills. It also covers other grammatical topics.
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Correcting Run-on Sentences February 18, 2025 Openi Prev Next ng Praye r Prayer for Humility Loving God, we ask for Your help to walk humbly with our brothers and sisters. It is all too easy for us to fall prey to our flesh and to walk in arrogance. Pride causes division, but...
Correcting Run-on Sentences February 18, 2025 Openi Prev Next ng Praye r Prayer for Humility Loving God, we ask for Your help to walk humbly with our brothers and sisters. It is all too easy for us to fall prey to our flesh and to walk in arrogance. Pride causes division, but Lord, help us to humble ourselves in order that we do not let the lies of the enemy overtake us, rather, help us to count ourselves as equals with one another. It is then that we will stop attempting to be better than others, and we can love their hearts for the unique person You made them to be. Help us to value one another in this humble spirit so that we may live to the fullest. Amen. Prev Next Review What is an independent clause? Remin der Humility: the state of being humble Warm-up Activity Read and Observ e. "I love to read books they take me to different worlds my favorite book is about a young detective who solves mysteries I finished it in two days." a.Can you read this sentence smoothly? b.Does it make sense as one thought? c. Where do you think a break should go? Run-on Sentences One of the many sentence errors that writer commit is writing run- on sentences. Run-on sentences are two sentences (or independent clauses) which are incorrectly combined. Run-on sentences are result of two independent clauses that were combined by a comma or were combined without a coordinating conjunction or a punctuation to separate the two. Example Incorrect: We are saving for the souvenirs, I should not buy anything before the trip. Correct: We are saving for the souvenirs. I should not buy anything before the trip. If you were to use a comma to link two independent clauses, it would be a comma splice. Think of commas as being to weak to hold main clauses together without the help of a conjunction. There are different ways to correct a run-on sentence. 1. Join the independent clauses with a semicolon (as a substitute for a coordinating conjunction). There are different ways to correct a run-on sentence. Make sure that both sentences are of equal logical and grammatical weight in the sense that both clauses have a subject, a verb, and a complete thought. Example Incorrect: My teacher read my essay she said it was excellent. Correct: My teacher read my essay; she said it was excellent. There are different ways to correct a run-on sentence. 2. Insert a coordinating conjunction between the two sentences (independent clauses). Example Incorrect: I am a woman, I am a machine operator. Correct: I am a woman, and I am a machine operator. Example Incorrect: The flight will take 20 hours we are all going to bring our books to read. Correct: The flight will take 20 hours, and we are all going to bring our books to read. Example Incorrect: My friend works as a manager at an expensive restaurant she is very humble. Correct: My friend works as a manager at an expensive restaurant, but she is very There are different ways to correct a run-on sentence. 3. Convert one of the sentences to a dependent clause by adding a subordinating conjunction and then combine the two clauses forming a complex sentence. Example Incorrect: Pedro travelled with his family the entire weekend, he still showed up at work on Monday. Correct: Although Pedro travelled with his family the entire weekend, he still showed up at work on Example Incorrect: Maria held her chest as she was opening her letter from the university her heart was beating loudly. Correct: Maria held her chest as she was opening her letter from the university because her heart was beating loudly. Questio ns? Let’s apply. Study and analyze the structure of the sentences. Write ✔ if the sentence is correct. If it is a run-on sentence, revise it to correct the construction. 1.Modern literature in the Philippines started after 1986 this was the time when Filipinos were rebuilding what was left of the Martial Law Period. 2. Filipino writers did not do away with the past, the modern literature was influenced by the old one. 3. Writers experimented with their manner of presenting literary works to a much-awakened Filipino reader. 4. The pieces of literature in the contemporary/ modern time are more colorful, honest, brave, and liberated, Filipinos are more aware of their identity having gone through different stages and experiences. 5. Writers are more profound in introducing new works that represent the modern Filipino. Let’s reflect! What are the striking mistakes you have committed this year? What did you get from those As humans, we commit errors as we learn and grow. Making mistakes is a major part of life, and it is entirely okay. conscious effort to slowly stop the fear of being wrong, and instead, look for the Complete the statement. Today, I discovered __________________. Assignment English Graded Assessment 3.1 is on February 25, 2025. Coverage: Run-on Sentences and Spelling Closin g Prayer