Edit the following paragraph for run-on and comma splices. Choosing a career is difficult I an torn between two fields. My best grades have been in math classes and my father wants... Edit the following paragraph for run-on and comma splices. Choosing a career is difficult I an torn between two fields. My best grades have been in math classes and my father wants me to be an accountant. Accountants make good salary in addition, they are always in demand. My uncle is an accountant and has found good jobs in four exciting cities. I would like the security and opportunity of such employment on the other hand, I dream of a different career. I have been working at a restaurant for four years as a result, I have learned about inner workings of the restaurant business. The job is tough nevertheless, I would love to have my own restaurant. Everyone warns me about the huge financial risks and long hours yet these challenges can be exciting. Someday I will have to choose between a risky venture in the restaurant business and a safe, well-paying career in accountant Read more

Here is the edited paragraph: Choosing a career is difficult; I am torn between two fields. My best grades have been in math classes, and my father wants me to be an accountant. Accountants make a good salary; in addition, they are always in demand. My uncle is an accountant and has found good jobs in four exciting cities. I would like the security and opportunity of such employment; on the other hand, I dream of a different career. I have been working at a restaurant for four years; as a result, I have learned about the inner workings of the restaurant business. The job is tough; nevertheless, I would love to have my own restaurant. Everyone warns me about the huge financial risks and long hours, yet these challenges can be exciting. Someday I will have to choose between a risky venture in the restaurant business and a safe, well-paying career in accounting.

Choosing a career is difficult; I am torn between two fields. My best grades have been in math classes, and my father wants me to be an accountant. Accountants make a good salary; in addition, they are always in demand. My uncle is an accountant and has found good jobs in four exciting cities. I would like the security and opportunity of such employment; on the other hand, I dream of a different career. I have been working at a restaurant for four years; as a result, I have learned about the inner workings of the restaurant business. The job is tough; nevertheless, I would love to have my own restaurant. Everyone warns me about the huge financial risks and long hours, yet these challenges can be exciting. Someday I will have to choose between a risky venture in the restaurant business and a safe, well-paying career in accounting.