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Here's the feedback and a refined version of the scroll: ### **Feedback** 1. - - 2. - 3. - 4. - ### **Refined Version** **Mahir,\ ** You are the most selfless and kindest person I know. These aren't just words plucked from thin air---they're an honest reflection of who you a...

Here's the feedback and a refined version of the scroll: ### **Feedback** 1. - - 2. - 3. - 4. - ### **Refined Version** **Mahir,\ ** You are the most selfless and kindest person I know. These aren't just words plucked from thin air---they're an honest reflection of who you are. Time and again, you've shown your selflessness, and I can vouch for that. When I joined Riverside, feeling lost and unsure, you were the first person to make me feel heard. You didn't just listen---you supported me in every way you could. Your logical advice, though sometimes hard to follow, always pointed me in the right direction. And it's not just me. Teachers and peers alike see you as someone level-headed, smart, and considerate---qualities that run deeper than what's visible on the surface. To many, your high grades might define you, but I've had the privilege of knowing so much more. Beneath the brilliance is someone subtly funny, with a knack for the most unhinged jokes. Over the years, I've watched you grow from being reserved to becoming a comforting presence wherever you go. You don't just talk about your passions---you engage wholeheartedly in others' interests, making everyone feel seen and valued. Your humility is inspiring. Despite your accomplishments, you've never ridiculed anyone's struggles. Instead, you lift others up, always willing to help. You've shown me that success isn't about stepping over others but walking alongside them. Your eagerness to learn, your openness to feedback, and your courage to admit mistakes only deepen my respect for you. I'll never forget moments like watching you explain entire syllabuses minutes before exams or sharing your lunchbox with people you barely knew. These small, everyday acts embody who you are---someone who genuinely cares. You don't pity; you empathize. You don't lecture; you mentor. Mahir, you're the kind of person who leaves everyone a little better than you found them. And as you graduate, carrying with you all the lessons you've taught us, I hope you know just how much you've meant to all of us. Thank you for being a role model, a mentor, and a friend. With gratitude and admiration,\ \[Your Name\] This version enhances clarity, ensures grammatical accuracy, and adds a more cohesive emotional arc while maintaining a heartfelt tone.