10b_writing with research.pptx

Agenda  General Questions? Concerns?  Recap Quiz: APA Citations & Pronoun Use  Lesson & Learning Exercise: Organizing Research  Review: Paragraph Organization & Style  Test Review  Learning Exercise: Writing with Research Welcome! Paraphrase Consider how much of the evidence you should revi...

Agenda  General Questions? Concerns?  Recap Quiz: APA Citations & Pronoun Use  Lesson & Learning Exercise: Organizing Research  Review: Paragraph Organization & Style  Test Review  Learning Exercise: Writing with Research Welcome! Paraphrase Consider how much of the evidence you should review. If you were the lead investigator or report writer, you ought to be familiar with all of the evidence gathered. If you played a smaller role, you should not review the statements of other officers or witnesses whose involvement mirrored your own. If they saw something that you did not, or described something differently than you did, you may either be tempted to alter your evidence as a result, or their statements may unconsciously influence your own memory. LePard, D., & Donnelly, M. (2013, October). Excellence in giving evidence: Tips for new police officers. Blue Line Magazine 12. LePard and 25(8), Donnelly (2013) warn In preparing for trial, you need to make officers to avoid reviewing documents they didn’t prepare, as doing so may impact their own memories of events or influence them to change their testimony to match those accounts. sure you don’t run the risk of contaminating your own memory by reading other officers’ statements, which may unconsciously influence your own memory or tempt you to alter your evidence (LePard & Donnelly, 2013). Planning Your Claim: POINT-PROOF Boxes Main point: Organizational Stressors # paraphrase 1 Shift rotations, investigations requiring expansion of shifts, and OT can all lead to poor sleep habits and a disconnect from family and friends who don’t work shifts and have a more predictable schedule. 2 The culture of policing can lead officers to assume a persona of independence and invulnerability. 3 Officers may be stressed by how citizens perceive them. 4 5 Officers may feel compelled to act as role models, making it difficult to establish appropriate boundaries with new acquaintances. Officers may rely more on other officers who share the same scheduling needs and policing subculture rather than their family citation (Busch & Neely, 2022) (Stephens et al., 2019) (“Officers-citizen relations,” 2020). (Andersen, 2023) (Stephens et al., 2019) Components of an Effective Paragraph: Review Topic Sentence Comment Proof ary Research materials that provide data, opinions, ideas, case studies, examples, etc. Your connection / explanation of ideas to ¶ Concluding or Transitional Ineffective vs. Effective Topic Sentences Announces Topic Makes a Point about the Topic This paragraph examines the effects of cross-border crime. Smuggling across the American-Canadian border directly influences government regulations on cross-border trade. Strategies to end a ¶: Concluding & Transitional Sentences Analysis of Importance Ultimately, these restrictions on cross-border trade negatively impact the Canadian economy. Link to Next Point Not only does smuggling negatively impact Canada’s economy, but it also affects its citizens’ cross-border mobility. The organizational structure and culture of police agencies can be one of the key contributors to officers’ mental health issues. Busch and Neely (2022) explain how shift rotations and the need to sometimes extend or change shifts to meet investigative and staffing needs can be detrimental to officers. Oftentimes shifts lead to bad sleep habits and can lead to a disconnect from family and friends whose schedules are more predictable and more conducive to work-life balance (Busch & Neely, 2015). While scheduling has a major impact on officers’ mental health, another factor that can distance officers from their friends and family is the subculture inherent to most agencies that sees officers adopt a persona of invulnerability (Stephens et al., 2019). Both shifts and police culture can make it difficult for officers to rely on their family and friends for support. Officers can also feel stress about how they are viewed by citizens (“Officer-citizen relations,” 2020). Once such stressor is the pressure to be a role model, leading some officers to find it difficult to form new relationships and establish the appropriate boundaries with new acquaintances (Andersen, 2023). Oftentimes officers will rely most on fellow officers who share the same organizational stressors and are part of the same subculture (Stephens et al., POINT Topic Sentence PROOF Research to Support ¶ Commentary & Transitional Words Concludin g Sentence References LePard, D., & Donnelly, M. (2013, October). Excellence in giving evidence: Tips for new police officers. Blue Line Magazine 25(8) 12. Writing with Research Test (20%) You’ll receive two short articles and a research question. You will need to write a thesis that answers the question, outline a paragraph for 01 of your thesis’s main points, and write a paragraph based on your outline. Outline Thesis Test Prep: What to Bring • One 8.5 x 11” HANDWRITTEN cheat sheet • Pens / Pencils / Highlighters • Water Bottle Test Prep: What will be Provided • Test paper • Highlighters • Shared Dictionary