Eliminating Wordiness in Writing
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Eliminating Wordiness in Writing

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What is a synonym for 'very quickly' that improves the clarity of the sentence?

  • sprinted (correct)
  • quick
  • speedily
  • rapidly
  • Which of the following phrases is an example of redundancy?

  • unexpected surprise
  • safe haven
  • advanced planning
  • past history (correct)
  • What is the proper function of the word 'carefully' in the phrase 'carefully scrutinise'?

  • To modify the subject
  • To emphasize the action (correct)
  • To replace the main verb
  • To provide a contrasting idea
  • Which of the following phrases could be considered a tautology?

    <p>combine together</p> Signup and view all the answers

    Which of the following replacements reduces unnecessary words effectively?

    <p>very careful becomes meticulous</p> Signup and view all the answers

    What is a common misconception about writing that can lead to wordiness?

    <p>Adding more words makes a paper sound more important.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    Which of the following phrases is an example of eliminating wordiness?

    <p>Because we need to act quickly.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    What should be avoided in formal papers according to the rules?

    <p>Overusing personal pronouns like 'I' and 'we'.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    Which of the following best replaces 'in the event of/that' to eliminate wordiness?

    <p>If</p> Signup and view all the answers

    What type of modifiers should be avoided to prevent meaningless language?

    <p>Vague adverbs that do not add value.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    What is the main reason for the individual being late to class?

    <p>He had to finish his macroeconomics exam.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    What does the report aim to study?

    <p>Current trends of business.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    What does the author imply about a dip in the stock market?

    <p>It is temporary and does not necessarily mean a recession.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    Which psychological factor is mentioned as influencing American industrial productivity?

    <p>Employee motivation.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    What is suggested to happen if enough people protest the policy?

    <p>It will probably be revoked.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    What does the individual believe about governmental intervention in the economy?

    <p>It is not needed at all.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    What perspective does the individual have on American industrial productivity?

    <p>It is influenced more by psychological factors.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    Which of the following sentences eliminates unnecessary emphasis without changing the meaning?

    <p>The project is important.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    What is implied about grievances filed by employees?

    <p>There are multiple issues leading to these grievances.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    Which sentence demonstrates the simplification of sentence structure effectively?

    <p>The cliffs are made of basalt, an igneous rock.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    When rewriting sentences that begin with 'there are' or 'it is,' what is a best practice?

    <p>Eliminate the vague subjects to make the sentence more direct.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    Which of the following changes correctly combines sentences that start with 'this' or 'these'?

    <p>My couch and table will not be sold in the garage sale.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    Which option best represents a simplified version of the following sentence: 'There are many types of fruits in the basket.'?

    <p>The basket has a variety of fruits.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    Which of the following sentences best demonstrates the elimination of redundancy?

    <p>He found the neighbor next door attractive.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    Identify the statement that best eliminates excess wording.

    <p>The fascinating book captures the reader's attention.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    What is the best approach for sentences that start with 'it is'?

    <p>Rephrase to incorporate the subject directly.</p> Signup and view all the answers

    Study Notes

    Eliminating Wordiness

    • Rule 1: Avoid using "I" and "we" in formal writing.
    • Rule 2: Use the shortest and most precise word, avoiding multiple words when one will do.
      • Example: "it is possible that" → "might"
    • Rule 3: Avoid meaningless modifiers.
      • Example: "true fact" → "fact"
    • Rule 4: Replace vague intensifiers like "very" and "extremely" with more specific words.
      • Example: "very quickly" → "sprinted"
    • Rule 5: Simplify sentence structure by removing unnecessary clauses.
      • Example: "which is an igneous rock" → "an igneous rock"
    • Rule 6: Combine sentences that begin with "this," "these," or "that."
      • Example: "The couch and the table belong to my roommate. These will not be sold." → "The couch and the table belong to my roommate and will not be sold."
    • Rule 7: Rewrite sentences starting with "there are," "it is," and similar phrases.
      • Example: "There are many factors contributing to the obesity epidemic" → "Many factors contribute to the obesity epidemic"

    Exercise 1

    • Original: "He found his neighbour who lived next door to be attractive in appearance."
    • Revised: "He found his neighbor attractive."

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    This quiz focuses on essential rules for eliminating wordiness in formal writing. By applying these rules, you can enhance clarity and precision in your text. Test your understanding of how to simplify language effectively.

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