B2 First for Schools Writing Part 1 (An opinion essay) PDF

B2 First for Schools Writing Part 1 (An opinion essay) Summary Review the format and focus of Part 1 of the Writing paper. Revise useful vocabulary for writing an opinion essay. Learn useful techniques for planning your own essay. Evaluate two examples of a Writing Pa...

B2 First for Schools Writing Part 1 (An opinion essay) Summary Review the format and focus of Part 1 of the Writing paper. Revise useful vocabulary for writing an opinion essay. Learn useful techniques for planning your own essay. Evaluate two examples of a Writing Part 1 essay. Practise and evaluate your own answer to a Writing Part 1 task. Review: Writing Part 1 The B2 First for Schools Writing paper has two parts. Part 1 has only one task, which you must answer. You will:  be given the essay title.  be given two ideas to write about.  need to add one more idea of your own.  need to give an opinion and support it with reasons.  need to write between 140 and 190 words. Tip! You don’t have to be an expert, but you still have to answer the question! The topic will be something of general interest, so you won’t need any specialist knowledge. However, it is very important that you write approximately the right number of words. This shows that you can select relevant information, organise it well, avoid repetition and keep the reader interested. Your essay will be assessed according to these four criteria: 1. Content Focuses on how well you have completed the task, in other words, if you have answered the question. 2. Communicative Focuses on how appropriate the writing is for the task and whether you have Achievement used formal or informal style appropriately. For example, is the style right for a magazine article? 3. Organisation Focuses on the way you put together the piece of writing. Are the ideas logical and ordered? Have you used paragraphs and linking words? 4. Language Focuses on vocabulary and grammar. This includes demonstrating the range of language that you know, as well as how accurate it is. Tip! Manage your time. Try to spend no more than 40 minutes on Writing Part 1. The Writing Paper has two parts and you will have 80 minutes in total. Part 1 and Part 2 are both worth the same number of marks, so you should spend approximately the same amount of time (about 40 minutes) on each part. 1 Prepare to write 1: Review useful language In Writing Part 1, you need to show that you can use language appropriately to do things such as: Agreeing or disagreeing Giving examples Giving opinions Comparing and contrasting ideas Giving information or explanations and opinions Giving reasons Drawing conclusions You should also use a range of suitable expressions to organise your essay and help your reader understand the connections between your ideas. Look at the following phrases. Can you put them in the correct groups according to their function in an opinion essay? (The first one has been done for you as an example.) In my opinion / view… Firstly / Secondly / Another reason why… However, … Thirdly … To sum up… I partly / fully agree Moreover, … I firmly believe that… that… Finally… What is more, … Although… Consequently… As a result… In addition to this, … In conclusion… I personally feel that… Furthermore, … First / Second of all… Giving your own Structuring and Adding ideas Contrasting two Explaining opinion sequencing your ideas / examples / ideas statements Example: In my opinion / view… 2 Prepare to write 2: Generate and organise ideas 1. Imagine that you have been given the following essay task: ‘Teenagers are too young to teach other people about anything.’ Do you agree? Notes Write about: 1. technology 2. the environment 3. …………… (your own idea) How could you develop these first two ideas? Take notes in your notebook using a mind map like this: The environment Technology Changes in waste and recycling since This generation the year 2000 grew up online ‘Teenagers are too young to teach other people about anything.’ My own idea Tip! Read the task carefully. In Writing Part 1, you must use all the notes which are given in the task. For example, for the task above, if you wrote about technology but didn’t mention the environment, you would lose marks. 2. Add your own third idea to the mind map above, then add some notes to develop this idea. 3. Now do a brief internet search about this topic. (Make sure you use websites that are in English!) Can you find anything interesting that you would like to add to your mind map? Tip! Plan the structure of your essay before you write. One of the assessment criteria for Writing Part 1 is Organisation. It’s difficult to organise an essay clearly without making a simple plan first. Decide what points to include, in what order, and how they are connected – then start writing your essay. (Cross out your plan before you submit your test paper, so the examiner will assess only your essay and not the plan.) 3 Here’s a useful structure for an opinion essay: Paragraph 1 Introduce the topic using a general statement and give your opinion. Say whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Paragraph 2 Give the first reason to support your opinion. Provide specific justifications for your opinion, using examples if necessary. Paragraph 3 Give the second reason to support your opinion. Provide specific justifications for your opinion, using examples if necessary. Paragraph 4 Give the third reason to support your opinion. Make sure this is clearly different from the points you made in the previous 2 paragraphs. Paragraph 5 Summarise your ideas and repeat your opinion using different words to provide a strong conclusion. Evaluation task 1: Two sample essays Below, there are two examples of essays written in response to the task given in Prepare to Write 2. It’s now your job to identify the strengths and weaknesses of these essays according to the 4 assessment criteria that you looked at in Review: Writing Part 1. 1. Read each student’s work and take notes in the table below their essay. 2. Give each student a mark out of 5 for each assessment category. 3. Which essay do you think would get a higher mark in the B2 First for Schools exam? Why? Student A: Adults often think teenagers to be noisy, childish and violent. Some of them even don’t think they have any adult senses or wise thoughts at all but, as a teenager, I think we’re intelligent enough to teach other people some things, and, according to this, I’m not agree with the quotation on top of the page. For example, lots of teenagers have better knowledge in technology, so they can teach the older generation how to deal with gadgets. In our gymnasium there are special classes for the senior people where they are taught to work on computers, and their teachers are teenagers. Moreover, teenagers have the great knowledge in ecology, and they are really concerned on saving the planet alive. We talk a lot about environment on classes, we take part in ecology olympiades and contests for the best ecological projects and often won them, so we have a lot to tell the others about environmental problems and ways of their solving. Besides this, teenagers can teach adults foreign languages. According to the statistics, 50% of adult generation of our country don’t know any foreign languages, so we can help them to come by the new knowledge or to improve that what they have. And, of course, students from foreign countries can teach Russian students their language, and Russians can teach them Russian. It is sometimes done in linguistic centres. To sum up I can say that teenagers have great knowledge in many fields of study, so they can also teach the people of older generation and their classmates and friends. 4  Content: Communicative Organisation: Language: Did they use all the Achievement: Is the essay organised into Did they use a good notes given in the Is the style suitably clear paragraphs? range of vocabulary task? neutral / formal? Is the order logical? and grammar related to Did they write 140-190 Is every point justified Is the punctuation correct? the topic? words, or is it too long with a clear reason? Did they use linking words? Did they use language / short? accurately? ___ / 5 ___ / 5 ___ / 5 ___ / 5 Student B: I don’t think that teenagers are too young to teach other people about anything. Of course, they can’t know very well some things, for example: some scientific theories, history, mathematic at all and etc, but a lot of teenagers know a lot about technology. It’s normal for them to spend a lot of time with computer, different gadgets. Most of them know, how these gadgets work, so they can explain other people different moments of their working. My Granny often asks to me for a piece of advice about her mobile phone. Teenagers’ knowledge about technology usually based on practice, so often they don’t know about process of creating the phone, the TV, etc. They really shouldn’t try to tell about things, which they don’t know. People don’t need special knowledge about our world to make it better. Teenagers have a lot of time for help the environment and sometimes they tell about it people, who usually are very busy and couldn’t notice the awful problems. So they can and must tell and teach people to help our planet. In my opinion, teenagers shouldn’t teach other people about things, which they know very bad, it may be only funny and of course they ought to teach other people and help them with things, which they know very good. Today all people have opportunity to learn everything, what they want. They can search information in the Internet, in books and the age doesn’t matter. Content: Communicative Organisation: Language: Did they use all the Achievement: Is the essay organised Did they use a good notes given in the task? Is the style suitably into clear paragraphs? range of vocabulary Did they write 140-190 neutral / formal? Is the order logical? and grammar related words, or is it too long / Is every point justified Is the punctuation correct? to the topic? short? with a clear reason? Did they use linking Did they use this words? language accurately? ___ / 5 ___ / 5 ___ / 5 ___ / 5 5 Now compare your notes and marks with the examiner feedback. This is supplied at the end of the document. See Evaluation task 1: Sample essays - Examiner feedback. Do you agree or disagree with the examiner? Why? Exam task: Writing Part 1 Great work! You’re ready to practise writing an opinion essay for a real Writing Part 1 test. There are two ways you can do this: on the computer, or on paper. Both options are explained below. 1. To try the computer-based test, you need to use the Firefox or Chrome browser. Click here to open the test website and then follow the steps on the next page to begin the test: 1. This is only a practice test. You do not have to enter any personal details here. 2. Simply click this button to continue. 3. Read all the instructions carefully. 4. Click this button to start the test. You will move to the next screen and the timer will begin automatically. Important! Before you begin, please note: The online practice test includes Writing Part 2 as well, but you don’t have to do this part now. Make sure you save a copy of your essay for the final stage in this lesson. 2. If you prefer to do the practice test on paper, simply use the task below. 6  Source: Sample Test 1, D255/02. © UCLES 2015 Cambridge English Level 1 Certificate in ESOL International. Evaluation task 2: Your own essay Great work! In the real exam, you should always check your work carefully one final time before you submit your paper. Look at the essay you just wrote and ask yourself honestly: Content 1. Have you included all the points from the question in your notes? 2. Is your writing too long/short? Communicative 1. Have you given a clear reason to justify each point? Achievement 2. Have you given your opinion in the first and the final paragraph – but using different words. Organisation 1. Is your writing organised into clear paragraphs? 2. Have you included linking words to connect your ideas? Language 1. Have you checked your spelling carefully? 2. Have you used a variety of adjectives/adverbs? If you have repeated words, can you use synonyms? Now play the role of the examiner. What mark would you give your writing for Content, Communicative Achievement, Organisation and Language? Evaluation task 2: Compare your own essay with a model answer Compare your essay with a model answer for the task you practised in this lesson and read the examiner’s feedback. Look back at your essay and think: 1. What are the similarities and differences between your essay and the model answer? 2. Is there anything you would you change about your essay? What? Why? 7 Improve your writing skills Tip! Get a study buddy. Students can learn a lot from each other. Working together with other students is a really good way for you all to learn and develop your skills. If you have a classmate or friend who also did this practice Writing Part 1 task, why not swap essays and evaluate each other’s work? You can give useful critical feedback that will help each other improve the next essay that you write. Reflect: How do you feel about your writing skills? Write some ideas in your notebook about these questions: 1. What have you learned from this lesson about writing a good opinion essay? 2. Which areas of writing do you still need to develop? 3. What did you do well in this sample task? One final tip before you go Visit WriteAndImprove.com to practise your writing skills and get immediate feedback to help you continue developing. There are a range of exam-style tasks at different levels for you to try. 8  Answer key1 Prepare to write 1: Review useful language Giving your own Structuring and Adding ideas Contrasting two Explaining opinion sequencing your ideas / examples / ideas statements In my opinion / Firstly / Secondly / Another reason However, … Consequently… view… Thirdly … why… Although… As a result… I personally feel First / Second of In addition to this, that… all… … I firmly believe Finally… Moreover, … that… In conclusion… Furthermore, … I partly / fully agree To sum up… What is more, … that… Evaluation task 1: Sample essays - Examiner feedback Here is examiner feedback for the two essays you evaluated in this lesson. Student A – Examiner feedback Content Communicative Organisation Language Achievement All content is relevant and The essay uses a good The text is well organised There is a range of the reader is fully informed. style which and uses a variety of technical and some communicates the linking expressions and environmental The writer discusses the writer’s ideas effectively grammar (like pronouns) vocabulary, plus some statement and gives and clearly. to make references clear. formal essay examples to support their vocabulary (According opinions and develop their The paragraphs are well Some organisational to the statistics). There argument. constructed and the features are used well: for is a range of simple main points are example, the first The essay is focused on the and complex grammar, introduced with suitably paragraph presents a knowledge and skills that which is mostly formal phrases (For popular view of teenagers teenagers have. The third accurate. example; Moreover; (noisy, childish and point, the writer’s own idea, Besides this; According violent; Some of them There are some focuses on language skills to; To sum up). [adults] even don’t think). mistakes with less that teenagers have and This is contrasted with, common vocabulary, how they can use these to The essay does not but, as a teenager, I think, but this is only help others communicate. present both sides of the mirroring the construction because the writer is argument, but this is OK. of the previous statement. being ambitious. Mark: 5 Mark: 4 Mark: 5 Mark: 4 1 All sample tasks and feedback in this lesson are adapted from the B2 First for Schools Handbook for teachers. © UCLES 2019. Available online at https://www.cambridgeenglish.org/exams-and-tests/first-for-schools/ 9 Student B – Examiner feedback Content Communicative Organisation Language Achievement All content is relevant and the The essay uses a The essay is A range of everyday reader is fully informed. good style in general, generally well vocabulary is used which communicates organised, with a appropriately in the The essay discusses the main the writer’s ideas clear introduction context of this essay (a question of whether teenagers are effectively overall. and paragraphs. piece of advice; based too young to teach and provides an on practice; process of opinion on what teenagers are good The writer uses good The writer uses a creating; special at (a lot of teenagers know a lot language for giving variety of linking knowledge). about technology), and how explanation and words and other practical knowledge of technology opinion. referencing features Simple grammatical can help others (they can explain (Of course; for forms are used well. The first two points other people different moments of example; Most of When the writer tries to are included in their working). In the second point, them; In my use more complex separate paragraphs, the writer explains that teenagers opinion). forms, there are a lot of but the third point is have time to learn about mistakes. For example, an idea which is The conclusion environmental problems and should specific expressions or expressed in the states an opinion share this knowledge. use of prepositions (they whole essay. If this on the main can’t know very well; Finally, the third point presents the idea were discussed question (teenagers explain other people; tell negative aspect that teenagers are in a separate shouldn’t teach about things; time for more practical and sometimes paragraph, the three other people about help). aren’t able to teach a subject in points would be things, which they much detail (they can’t know very presented more know very bad). It The number of mistakes well some things, for example: clearly, and it would doesn’t summarise makes the whole essay some scientific theories; often they be easier for the all of the main less effective, but the don’t know about process of reader to pay points, but this is reader can usually still creating the phone; shouldn’t teach attention. OK. understand what the other people about things, which writer means. they know very bad). Mark: 5 Mark: 2 Mark: 3 Mark: 2 10 Evaluation task 2: Your own essay Here is a model answer, with examiner feedback, for the task you practised in this lesson. Nowadays, more and more parents are making the controversial decision to teach their children at home rather than sending them to school. Although this approach to education has advantages, pupils who learn only at home definitely lose more oportunities. First, children who don’t go to school only know two teachers, the same people who are also their parents. Because of this, the pupils may not learn other points of view outside their family. Besides this, there is also the question if parents have the qualifications and knowledge to teach every subject. Perhaps their mother and father are experts in one or two subjects, but any school provides teachers expert in every subject. We should remember that there is more to education than learning about topics. In addition, going to school is also a way to meet people your own age and to make friends. It is clear that children can socialise better at school, and as a result, children at school will have the chance to start many lifelong relationships. I agree that parents can have some good reasons for having home school, but overall, considering teachers and friends, it’s much better for children to attend school. Content Communicative Organisation Language Achievement All content is relevant and The essay is very well The writer uses a wide The writer the writer discusses the first written. It uses the right variety of linking words and demonstrates a good two points in the question. style for an essay, expressions to connect the range of vocabulary, which keeps the reader ideas in the text. including some They talk about the interested. It also uses effective common word disadvantages of having The essay is generally well formal language well. combinations parents teaching their own organised, with positive and (controversial decision; children. They explain that The writer gives negative opinions being this approach to only one view might be balanced views and given (Although this education; more to offered and that there might opinions, and also approach to education has education than not be enough knowledge supports these views advantages; Because of learning; socialise about certain subjects. with examples this; Besides this, there is better; lifelong (Perhaps their mother also; I agree that... but). On the second point, the relationships). and father are experts writer says that children The essay has a good in one or two subjects). There is a range of have more opportunities to overall structure, with a simple and complex socialise at school and will Both simple and more clear opening paragraph grammar which makes find it easier to make complex ideas are which introduces the topic the ideas clear. There friends. communicated clearly of the essay. Two points are are some mistakes, but to the reader (pupils developed in the main part However, there is no third the reader still may not learn other of the essay and there is an point (your own idea). This understands what the points of view outside effective conclusion which means the reader doesn’t writer means. their family). summarises the writer’s have all the information they own view. need. Mark: 4 Mark: 5 Mark: 5 Mark: 5 11